“Through poetry I have told the stories of my soul, as the universe, I am, and always will be. My soul expands once more, for I am fed the sacred fruit of knowledge, and love by my brothers, and sisters. Grasp my articulation, and reveal to me your soul, it is then you will see our souls are one. To know you is to know my lost self. To love you is to love the whole of my self. I have seen the seasons of your sorrow, and the precessions of your joy. I am truly blessed.”

Site rankMAJOR GENERAL

Awards

Karma 8,000 Blood stone

Poems snapshot

59Total poems
32,587Lifetime views
0Last 7 days
0Last 30 days
0Last 90 days
0Last 365 days

Join free to nominate, save, follow and join this poet's camp.

life 1 min read 634 views May 30, 2016

A Being Incomplete

No foreign substance can make you who you are not.

No sun shall exist In a barren void.

You were indeed born in a world of chaos,

but you embraced this chaos 

and raised it as your own.

You must know young soul 

another's body will never make you whole.

You are not an incomplete puzzle, 

but rather water brought to a boil.

You are not half of a being young soul.

But you are indeed a withered tree,

who's essence has been pulled into its roots.

Let your essence free,

so as to blossom just as the souls around you.

Let your power be risen,

and your pride regrown.

Let me see a smile upon your face next time,

and let me hear the words "I love myself".

I stand with you my soul,

and love is the ground beneath us.

Just open your eyes, and you'll see,

Beauty and Power you'll then be. 

Discussions (0)

No discussions yet. Start one to ask about a line, share what the poem meant to you, or talk craft with other members.

Log in to start a discussion about this poem.

Comments (4)

Join free to commentPoets read every comment, and every one you leave earns karma. Registration is FREE.

Join free Log in

RonnieL

Great flow in this piece, very descriptive and eye opening. Thanks for this write.

Read RonnieL's poems

Woven

"No sun shall exist In a barren void." "You are not an incomplete puzzle, but rather water brought to a boil." It's lines like these that wowed me. This piece has such power, and is immensely inspirational.

Read Woven's poems

Hsanan

Thank you very much.

Read Hsanan's poems

love_supreme

I like this poem.

Read love_supreme's poems

login below

Forgot your username?

 
Poets read every comment. Join free to comment, follow and save poems. Join free