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Black woman asked was she still beautiful (Behind the mask)

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I replied...

  I can understand y'all pain,

  I can see those flames,

  lost in the game,

  not even cherished,

  there is not enough respect from men or women to even put "Respeck" on y'all names.

  Don't that have to change?!

  Who's to blame?

  Respect yourself first and the rules will surely change. 

 Y'all are more than Bad B's and H's, y'all are Queens by nature,

  it's not the man, but it's the woman who is God's favorite creation,

  especially the Black woman because after all she is the mother of civilization.

  The mother of all the prophets and of the saviors, your womb is sacred,

  so do it a favor and let nothing vile disgrace it.

  Be strong and courageous, yet humble and amazing,

 if you submit to God, he'll grant you a billion favors.

  Be proud of the skin that you're in, the beautiful shades, the different flavors,

  find a leader to follow, let him plant Godly seeds,

  let him cultivate ya.

  Motivate ya, stroke ya mind, earn your time, make him polish you up, say you're a diamond and you just have to shine.

  Leave trails of pheromones and honesty, create something majestic, why not build a dynasty?!

 Built on the foundation of modesty Even the blind would see, how beautiful and life changing the Truth can be.

 Been getting it wrong all of these years, why not try something new to combat those tears and erase those fears?!

  Purification of the mind, body, and soul, will bring back your golden years and that's what this world fears,

  To have the black woman back on the throne, and once again calling the entire universe her home.

  Tell another sister something good and please sound the alarm,

  time to get the Queendom back in order again, you're worth too much to stay on these plantation farms. 

 Current homie don't really love ya and you don't really trust him, why even stay? Your future is dim.

  His words are like scissors and he just keeps cutting your stems.

  The change that you wish to see in the world lives inside of you, let that new world manifest, but it will require some sacrifices.

  Qadar Dwon'

  #poem #poetry #blackwoman #Queen #modesty #newworld #backontop #learnthetruth #aintnopeasantbih #ontrack

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Respect - nice flow!
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mlowe5 says:

Powerful my Brother! We must continue to praise the Mothers of civilization. Indeed, when The Most High presented Himself to mortal beings, He chose the womb! And there is no doubt that it was precious womb of color! May The Most High continue to ink you pen with praises of truth. Peace and Love.
 

xclusive says:

Gotta put some repeck on this write. Nice work
 

Goddess Bee says:

Soooo powerful! 💜

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Woven says:

So many lines here were quite gripping. Getting back to the core of it all...what if! Wow...Fabulous write!
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@nosajm@gmail.com thank you brother.. I definitely appreciate your feed back..
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Mlowe5... It's always a blessing and a honor to receive your feedback.. You've motivated and encouraged me so much on this journey, can't forget about the confidence you gave me.. Thank you sir..
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Xclusive Thank you for reading my brother! Much respect.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@B.Dynasty thank you for taking your time out and reading this piece... Means a lot!
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Woven it's always nice to hear your feedback.. What if?! I know deep in my heart the world wide be back like that and it will be pleasant for the black woman sooner than people think... Thank you much..
 

mrmelody7 says:

Very strong n colorful write really enjoyed this you really covered a lot of ground heres hoping folks will head these golden nuggets

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Thank you my brother for your golden feedback! I swear you're SK humble bro and being humble is the best gift from God.. Always grateful for your genuine feedback.
 

RonnieL says:

Great write my dude, Loved the word play, but the message was moving. STANDING O!

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jwins says:

My Brother! I know that I don't know you. But I can honestly say that I love the love that's in you towards the so called Black Woman. I am lost for words as I read your devotional piece here. Thank you for the share. Peace and Love to you!!!

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