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miss_chaniel
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Deep impact

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Deep impact Somewhere resides a Damage heart Unexpectedly I met you I expected you to heal my heart Material things don't mean much to me Its the simple things Walk in the parks Little talks after dark The rush of you paying attention Stimulates bloodstream that pumps to my heart Blood veins behind beautiful eyes simple yet profound A sight deeply unparalleled Everything was perfect Why things wasn't parellel Tough form of disguised of Bad habits Ugliness undisputed Breathe with one breath Clinging on whatever love is left When love is found The cracks of pieces I thought was sealed Falling surrounding me Love can't shield The pain i felt Thought left my memory So I tried to maintain old memory Whatever I felt in my pass I didn't wanted to interfere with us I found everything That wasn't satisfying me Not realizing I made it all about me I thought I minus the pain End up adding you to the flame We Ended up divided Now these thoughts keep multiplying Wish I could x the mistakes Find humor in y Wish love was more than enough

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xclusive says:

Nice write.. it's hard to find someone that makes it all worth it
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The Immortal Wize says:

Really deep!

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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Piece....Indeed....thanks for sharing!

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SMusinga says:

Aww! Such a sweet sweet poem. It was really beautiful.

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