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romance 2 min read 330 views Jun 22, 2016

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Sky high, clear night nothing but chaos in my mind. Sleep is needed but my heart is restless. Connections failing and my feelings are reckless. Check this. How could one break a heart and feel nothing but receive the same and begin crumbling. Body is numb and words fumbling. Surprised by the fact that karma came, bc you never thought she'd make you feel the same. Think you know how she felt? Not exactly . see the difference is she knew what was happening. You were blind to the fact that she'd grow wings & want to experience different things. You thought she'd never find another & little do you know you pushed her further. Helped her realize what she didn't need and showed her she deserved a real king. The real thing. Someone who could be committed to only her. A love that's never obscure nor unsure. Your heart was incapable of love now you realize this. She's moved on and you can't help but to reminisce. Think, wonder and miss. Everything about her you realize you took for granted. He loves her right and you can't stand it. But this is your fault just remember that, she loved you and you didn't know how to love back.

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