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life 2 min read 411 views Jul 20, 2016

Innocence

Everyone wants to be in a relationship that's healthy. But no one can withstand the pain and struggle unless you're wealthy. Material things run our world and if you have nothing to offer she's not your girl . Selling dreams of an empty future and refraining from any rumor. A full heart and thoughtful mind are no longer enough, not even for the girl with noone to trust. Empty dreams of building and growing together as if y'all would withstand any type of weather. Before your very eyes you watch her distance herself, separate your hearts as if they never felt. She can move on in an instant because with you the feelings were innocent . She never let it go to far, she never let you in her heart. She had a wall up from the very beginning and acted as tho you were winning. And then you saw the real her. the woman who couldn't give love, the woman who was incapable of feeling anything more than a body rub. She wanted a companion. Perhaps someone to play house with. She needed your body and used it because she was selfish. You see everybody wants a healthy relationship but no one wants to work no one wants to believe that there's diamonds below the dirt.

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love_supreme

These are true words. Excellent write.

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after vision

my poet, I find comfort in the lessons learned here. so often lost takes the lead in our lives

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love_supreme

Very nice

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