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Superman

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My superman. My hero. My light at the end of the tunnel. My happiness my smile . My reminder to always remain humble. 9 years old with eyes throwing hearts at the sign of your car , running and jumping into your arms. Never cared about the disappointing times because you always made it up by making me shine. Amusement parks, family trips and food all the time. Group home down the street and i had to ride by."baby im at work ill come see you after" okay daddy just wanted to say hi and hear a lil laughter. Always the strongest man in the room to me. Never let me forget how a woman's heart is supposed be. Full of life, love , happiness and smiles . to see you again I'd walk an infinite amount of miles. Heaven's pretty far but I know you're safe. God had a bigger plan for someone so great. He knew id need your guidance , he knew id need your help , he knew id need more to live for than just myself. So today I stand, with a heavy heart and your picture in hand. Head to the sky , yelling I love you superman💕

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SMusinga says:

simply superb..... this poem should be taught or atleast known to all literature students den only the beauty of a poem wil be known to all....

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The Immortal Wize says:

Touching and beautifully scribed. Welcome to the Vibe!

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RonnieL says:

Heart felt piece. Lost my dad a short time back. Great tribute.

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