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First day back on the Job

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Qadar where you been?!

  Dwon' where you been?!

For surely I haven't been chasing Dollars

Just been trying to make sense.

As with any knowledgeable man, he always leaves behind a trail of cents.

Canceling all wicked checks, and only paying righteous rent.

With Humble intent,

jumbo imprints on the minds of the people,

he's been called the fresh prince, time and time again,

the blessing that's sent

to put the smiles on the people,

to inspire, cultivate, motivate, and to give them hope again.

Mind is super amazing,

body is super basic,

know so much $h*t,

some people think that I'm super crazy,

if I listen to their bullsh*t, it'll make me super lazy.

Keep my eyes and my nose in books,

I literally eat pages,

I have a paper tooth, and only truths ease my cravings.

Smells  so good, makes me snort lines of verbs, nouns, adjectives, adverbs, metaphors, similes, conjectures, and meaningful adjacents,

this is a high that I'll forever be chasing.

Creative forms of literature are truly my life savings,

if I go into my account, I can produce a statement of a billion amazing sayings and phrases that my mind has created.

Can't be duplicated,

because The Most High planted them,

I put them into word form, now the people chant them,

like I'm some type of poetic champion.

I freestyle because my handwriting is so terrible,

to say that nothing is ever written, when I finish cooking stanzas, the pieces are enjoyable and edible.

As long as I have poetry, I'll never be unemployed,

I'm employable because it's a world of poetry that we live in, most don't see it,

filling out applications with my mind,

and in due time I'll climb up the corporate latter to recite some sick rhymes.

To make people dig deep into their minds and make them write poetry at least once,

because poetry is ancient and it has been here since the beginning of time.

Poetry and mathematics, man I'm such a addict, everything adds up, and my mind I freely let you have it..

Qadar Dwon'

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RonnieL says:

Spit That! Love this piece.True bruh, the most high planted them!

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mlowe5 says:

My Beloved Brother, may you continue to be eternally employed. Vacations--re-energizing are necessary to give give birth to pregnant truths. You know what I'm saying. What a beautiful birth this piece is. Continue bless from The Most High be upon You. Peace and Love.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Brother RonnieL it's always a honor and pleasure to receive your feedback.. You're a very genuine brother and active supporter of every writer.. That's the mixture of a perfect poet and that you are! Thank you..
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Kingqadardwon' says:

My wise brother @Mlowe5.. Your pieces have made me come back to work many of times.. Especially your dead poets piece recently, that touched me.. The way that we now write and speak so well as poets, makes our ancestors proud of us.. We poets didn't let them down as they live forever through us... We can tell every story in such creative ways.. It's always an honor and treat to receive your wisdom and feedback.. Peace, love, and blessings forever sir!
 

Woven says:

Wowed by the wordplay. Living and breathing poetry, the flow created here complemented what you conveyed, that you were speaking from your core. This was marvelous.

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2b2b2 says:

KingQadar yes brah, poetic kata, love this flex' yesssss! Let it out and thanks for sharing....ONE
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Woven I'm even more marveled by your feedback.. It feels great to be in great company.. It makes me feel good to release words. That's my high...
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@2b2b2... Thank you Mayor.. If only you knew how much your feedback alone has encouraged me, motivated me and inspired me to produce poetry... You have helped my confidence tremendously.. I recently released my 2 poetry books.. The vibe gave me so much confidence and courage to drop my pieces..

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