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life 1 min read 835 views Jul 18, 2016

Conversation facing the Moon

 

This blue bridge holds my physical and mental mass,

 staring right at the diameter and circumference of this great full moon.

Its beauty and presence is greatly misunderstood.

If there is a Moon, there is a superior being,

who probably plays magnetic basketball and swish 3 pointers through them black holes all day.

Getting fouled by the stars,

free throw line ready, that's a 4 point play,

balling and pulling up jumpers all night

until his Sun says I've had enough,

it's now the break of the day.

This is how I imagine what true Peace looks and feels like,

down here we just try to mimic,

we're not even close to getting it right.

#Solarsystemlivesmatter,

If I had a ladder that I could climb and reach to the heavens,

something longer and more righteous than the tower of Babel,

I'll paint me and the ones that I love legacies in all of that unused dark matter,

not all, but only righteous black lives matter.

                       

                               Qadar Dwon'

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RonnieL

Standing O! Ten snaps God.....feelin this one right here!

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mrmelody7

Love this galaxy heavenly poetry like this as you say here on earth they dont have a club love how you broke it down back to earth with that last line

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mrmelody7

Good job King hit the wrong key the word should be clue not club

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Kingqadardwon'

@RonnieL. I appreciate you much God for always vibing with me.. Last night was just a beautiful night and I just wanted to share. I was at peace.. Thank you again sir!

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Kingqadardwon'

@Mrmelody7, thank you my beloved brother.. Yes we try to mimic, but there is no order down here. Everything in space is organized, it submits to the creator, perfect harmony, every object respects one another, man it's just right.. I want to be in an environment like that..

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2b2b2

great, Great, GREAT......ONE....well crafted!

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WarriorCarryingWater

Nice!! #Solarsystemlivesmatter!

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Woven

Such a creatively beautiful write, seeing beyond the beyond. This was a wonderful write!

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love_supreme

Excellent write

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