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Dream. Believe. Build. Expand. And don’t let someone get you down.

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A Lovely Dream

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I first met her on a holiday at Shuklaphanta Wildlife Reserve.

 Love strikes me like lightning when I saw her,

so powerful and intense it can’t be denied.

It turns me inside out,

and there was no going back from it.

Once the thunderbolt hits, my life irrevocably changed.


With a carved stem-thin figure,

And sparkly appearance.

Her pencil-thin eyebrows,

 eased down gently to her velvety,


Her beauty is the celebrity's cute wind-swept

 twisting through

 the late evening's darkening heavens.


Her smile shines stunningly

like the sun rising over the skyline,

 her luminous, heavenly-white teeth flashed

as she pawed at me with her flick star nails.

Her gorgeousness is the stars

that is now quivering into view

as their star shine ends its life journey

 as a whim I am.


Her enticing, constellation-blue eyes

 gazed at me

 over her syrup-sweet lips,

She had a springy character

and a syrupy voice, which I idolized.

She is like a candle's flickering flame,

radiating a soft warm light into me.


Her hair was ebony-black

and it tumbled over her shoulders.

Her beauty shines from the inside out,

 It flows like a journey down a long route.

Those sugar candy-sweet lips,

 her well-designed personality,

all awestruck me.


Her eyes sparkle like a bright star in the sky,

seek out the good in me.

Her body ornately furnished with typically girlish curves,

Her voguish garments still kept enslaved an odor evocative

 of lemony fresh and floral-fresh mint.

It loitered in the apartment long after she had gone.

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social seer says:

So nicely described, these visitors we men occasionally have.

AFter vision says:

my poet, she had to be a queen for your pen to detail all that came into focus that day

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RonnieL says:

Nice descriptive write. This woman must of had a lasting impression on you. Been there.

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yuhi says:

The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake. Those who dream by night in the grubby retreats of their thoughts, wake in the day to find that it was vanity. Thank you very much for your comments, I hope it was a reality.

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latin_lover says:

Excellent write.

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yuhi says:


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