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The Immortal Wize

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If you're reading this you're it, get with it stay with it don't quit.

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do we laugh when we want to cry
live when all there is left is to die
persistently we are continuing to try
why? we all want to fly in order to do that
we must try though life may derail us
while the thought of war impels us
we come into focus  just to realize
that there is more to that, than a eye
it's not an eye nor is it a sky
we have been hocus pocus
to wake us they had to poke us
is this symptom emptiness
could it be hunger, do we need
vitamins to make us stronger
we vibrate like a cellphone
so no one else knows we're on
the march is no longer heard
not one single word, peep or sound
the revolution must be fought in our minds
outburst and violence we must bind
somebody somewhere is lying
hold up your hand, your name is spoken
don't try to fix it, leave it broken
it's time to rebuild, time has spoken
there is nothing to laugh about
where there is no joking
 

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catmartan says:

Real Talk Resound !

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Profound indeed! The evolution of the revolution.. The revolution is truly in our minds.. Speak life and it will become flesh.. So much juice in this piece!
 

after vision says:

my poet, this truth is the truth

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