after vision
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CATEGORY
life
lower the rope
let me grab and climb
give me the love
that you call - mine
choke this neck
kneed the feeding line
instruct my clock
on the life - of time
sow the fabric
into my soil
be my ice
when i come to a boil
belt the pants
that without you would fall
tone the ring
whenever i am charged to call
lower the rope
let me grab and climb
give me the love
that you call - mine
charles garner aka after vision
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COMMENTS
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The Immortal Wize says: Love the flow!...Much Respect |
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mrmelody7 says: Very flowrific indeed express yourself done very well and uniquely |
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after vision says: thank you Wize dom and mrmelody for the love so seldom shown on this site. |
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Lovelylady1 says: My king, I should be sleeping but too many *what if's" dancing around in my mind. I love hearing your heart sing! Keeps me encouraged. |
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after vision says: lovely lady you just put ink in my pen, thank you |
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hymnagen says: Few things worth cherishing more than real support. And yes, the flow...like melted butter. Peace, poet |
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after vision says: thanks hymnagen for the read and the ink |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: This hits on so many levels - bravo! |
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Desthewildcat says: Love it |
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Iyanna11 says: Beautiful |
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love_supreme says: I dont see how I missed this one, fire. |
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