Psalms, Prose, Poetry, and Prophecy
When I see you, I can't help but to only think of paradise
And your luminous light that your energy gives off,
Vibes of peace and blessings, that rattles the strings of my heart
All the way down to the veins of my wrist and my feet.
The sweet harmonies of your voice is perfectly tuned
And in sync with the universe.
You captured me, I became a fan,
Totally against my divine nature to thirst someone
And want to quench that thirst, I now chant "Yes I can".
"Yes you can what?"
Be a part of the gameplan that features us.
I can score four touchdowns, or drop 30 points a night
In your mind and make you blush layups in your sleep.
Take every thought on your mind and rewind it right in front of your eyes,
intercept your heart and put it on a platter of mine, give you my heart and my mind
and won't mind sharing it like the last slice or two finger picking the last crumb.
I won't fumble nor stumble, no turnovers in this game,
it's too important and too valuable, I desire to be your MVP,
Most Valuable Partner, or Melanated Vaccinated Prescription.
You are poetry, I am the pen, the others were prose, we wasn't kin, you are the rose, the others would be a thorn in my skin.
Qadar Dwon'
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Join free Log inRonnieL
Dope! Great metaphors and wordplay, excellent write. Definitely feelin this.
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Awesome work here KQD, Incredible visualization and a master flow! I appreciate the share.
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@RonnieL.. Thank you brother for always vibing with me. I always appreciate your feedback, greatly appreciated.... Peace,light, love, and blessings..
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@Ladypoet45.. Thank you so much.. I love your always inspiring feedback.. It keeps me encouraged and motivated..
Read Kingqadardwon''s poemsEmpressRee
Love, love, love
Read EmpressRee's poemsAlexiscoon4135
"u are poetry, I am the pen, the others were prose, we wasn't kin, you are the rose, the others would be a thorn in my skin." I love when I read a poem and I get this rush of energy, as if I'm right there in the artist mind. You are very talented. Great work!
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"it's too important and too valuable, I desire to be your MVP, Most Valuable Partner, or Melanated Vaccinated Prescription." Those stanza straight flames, great write altogether
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@empressree Thank you for enjoying this piece.. sincerely appreciated
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@Alexiscoon4135 Thank you so much! I'm joyed that you can find some energy in this piece.. Thank you for that compliment! Motivation for the future..
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@Xclusive thank you brother for always sharing your positive feedback... That's major inspiration..
Read Kingqadardwon''s poemsmrmelody7
Sure you right write either way you got it King always a pleasure to read your creative work
Read mrmelody7's poemsmlowe5
Yes! That pregnant poetic mind I met some time ago is now taking us to where we must go! What a powerful pen! We old sages can now take time knowing that our youth have come into what we've invisioned. May the Most Hight continue to bless you, my Son! Remember, your ink well remains deep and endless. Peace and Love, mlowe5 (aka Millard Lowe). Continue to motivate and guide those with you and those who will come after you. You are a waiting Elder in the coming! Thanks for the soaring of my poetic soul with this piece. Blessings.
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@Mrmelody 7... Shukran!(Thank you)... Man it's always a pleasure vibing with you brother! Thank you for accepting me always, it means a lot. Honestly the vibe is my family, I don't receive feedback from family and friends that know me personally about my work, hard to believe right? Lol.. They don't even truly know me, but the poets do.. appreciate you fam!
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@Mlowe5(Mr. Millard Lowe)... Thank you Sir for the passing of the torch to the ones that you and the elders have prophesied to come into existence..We are here and we won't drop the ball, I promise.. I know how important the story telling is and passing it down to the generations after. These are our stories. You are one of the greats! I admire your work and wisdom so much, I learn something new from you every time you spill ink and take it along with me on my Journey. You have taught me the importance of the pen! Peace, love, light, and blessings. I was blessed to encounter and interact with a true Griot of my time in you, that will forever stick with me..
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Nice work Dwon
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Excellent write.
Read love_supreme's poemsmlowe5
Forwards Ever! Backwards Never! Continue to write on my Brother! Peace and Love, mlowe5 (Millard Lowe). Jah Love!
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Thank you All... Sending much love, peace and light.
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