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i just want you to notice me

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Anger welled up in daughter’s heart
Boiling drum bursting upon chest
Over flooded streams
No help in hand
Just a stranger walking pass
Total breakdown of verbal communication
Unhealthy interaction
Just causing anxiety reaction
Wanted to be cradle like a newborn
I’m feeling more like an aborted child
A text message or card
Would be nice
I just want you to say I love you
Instead u just wants to fight
In your eyes I see disappointment
I’m fixing my mistakes
Still till this very day I haven’t gotten credit
I seek freedom from this damage relationship

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underhiswings7 says:

Very deep! This is profound

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