“my life”

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inpsirational 2 min read 346 views Jan 29, 2017

let her out..

she so beautieful ... a smile that lights up the room, hair as soft as cotton, and her laugh man that laugh was so contagious .. a mother of one and proud of it too good job nice car even a man or two lol .. very driven didnt care what no one thought about her made mistakes but who didnt always had a crowd around her .. but one day everything changed .. that smile that light up the room got dim.. her hair that was as soft as cotton got fragile .. mother of the year ? guess again .. her child beg for love and attention like its suppose to be earned . good job ..  nice car ? slowly drifting away and the man in her life .. leaves her on her own once the high is gone .. all she has left it pride and dignity right? .. body worned out and hurting cause she needing attention from whom ever she can get it from even if its for a fix shiiit thats all she needed to get by day by day and once the fix was gone the crowd that once surronds her scatters like roaches and than she all alone again .. buried under all that negativity was a woman crying for help but didnt know how to get it , depending on that baggie was all she knew didnt matter how or who she was gonna get it by any means .. family telling her "you need help" but all she here is silence if it aint about $ for a fix .. i love her and i wish i could help lord knows how many times i beg her to quit but ive learned people have to want it for them selves .. please god .. LET HER OUT !

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MicShy

Very deep spill of emotions. Perfectly penned.

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lady_j

thank you hun im new on here.

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