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just different 1 min read 611 views Feb 19, 2017

Maiden Cry

rain drops fall
like the maiden 's tears
 waiting for her heart to be filled

with the soul
that attached itself to her spirit

frozen in this limbo of torture

thoughts carry on
in her mind
the pain is real

creating the myths of her illusion

living for this dream

the sound of destiny's touch

comforting the essence of hope
within tear filled eyes

endless possibilities

fate conspires  in her imagination

Karma continues it's just journey

she calls to the night
hear the silent voice of the maiden's cries

 

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