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just different 1 min read 614 views Feb 20, 2017

"The Matrix Begins"


everything changes
it is like the air you breathe

our hearts go out to speak
 but our love does not see

we become numb to this kindness
forgetting to be there when we could

the helping hand has become an artificial land
 
the human machine has learned
to plug into an electronic jungle gym
 
missing the moments of life
those special highs

allowing this device to control our lives

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