“This latest poem - I am just not sure -the message is sound but it starts a bit odd - ah who am I kidding I am eccentric ”
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unlocking my truth
the limits cast upon me by this
cage I've been squeezed in
a limit only hidden by the locks on my mind
capable of infinite attainment
the ability to undo this latch
has been buried alive
within apperception of my imagination
hinged in sanity
the logic and reason
can not explain
confinement that do not exist
decipher me if you can
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You get Heavy at times but heavy to me means a message in there somewhere but for me everyone has to look in the nirro rand see beneath the surface who they really are fascinating write
Read mrmelody7's poemskavindra
thank you well it is something new I think a riddle within a poem something like that lol idk my mind is totally crazy at times
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Not crazy just creavity beyond what others see
Read mrmelody7's poemsmlowe5
Deep. But deeper still is the mind within itself. I still believed that it is the mind that locks and cages itself. Thus, it is the mind that has and holds the key to its own freedom. "...free you mind and you are---free as you want to be..." says mlowe5. What would the world be like if there were not those of us crazy enough to say what's on our freed mind---so crazy at times that it actually seems sane. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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I love this. Nice Word play
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I love this. Nice Word play
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