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Atom and Evolution(The revelation of what really happened)

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From the very first day of his existence, Atom was created to excel and evolve and also encourage Evolution to enlighten all of humanity.

  The sum of all is One, that's why we are constantly big banging in this universe or should I say one-verse or one-song.

Some jealous fallen star flashed enmity between Atom and his beloved Evolution.

No longer interested in being the Alpha of life, his attitude and his deeds enslaved the divine essence of Evolution.

Evolution was everything that even an angel wished to be , as a matter of fact she was the first thought of the One God to forever grow Atom.

Life has shown us and We all know that Atom can be destructive and explosive, abusive and abrupt tempered, awesome but most times aggravating when he becomes agitated when things don't Evolve as he planned it, like the world revolves around him.

Selfish seeds of Atom's apples, chill out Atom you are the manifestation of a Divine and merciful thought, be humble and grateful for everything because someone spoke you into existence and best believe that someone can speak you out of existence.

You have forgotten the Essence of Evolution and of your everything, every living thing was created in pairs to bring balance to this One goal.

This life was always meant to be a test to see if the most intelligent of life's species would make straight A's and give a concentrated effort into trying to Evolve in the mind and figure this thing out.

Egos and pride must fall and be placed into the bottomless pit and be chastised.

Echos and phonetics of pure tones, verbs, words, slurs, nouns, adjectives, about the subject must be chanted to truly evolve.

Hip Hop won't change you or the world, you must hop on the hips of those who know the way.

The only way that Evolution can truly evolve her Atom is if he just listens sometimes and be patient, it's OK to be taught by something that has many noticeable differences from you, Atom you were always fascinated with the physical and material realm because after all you are Atom and to you that's the only thing that Matter.

You neglected and sold your soul for material gains and physical pleasure, you've neglected the essence of your spirituality, you have enslaved your own Evolution, the only thing that can free you.

Evolution is 50 percent of your Existence and you will never be truly exalted without that liberating experience.

Atom must evolve in his mental and spiritual sciences unless he will continue to be a menace to the Evolution of humanity and to this universe, bang his head, bang Evolution's friends and family, bang guns, bang gangs, bang and abuse the faces, minds, and bodies of someone else's blessing because his evolution has become stagnated.

It is not Atom's eyes that are blind, but rather it is his heart that is without sight and can't see the Evolution that is right in front of him.

Atom and Evolution is the divine revolution that won't be televised.

Atom owes Evolution light years worth of love and apologies, show her the vowels to become better.

(A)tom and (E)v(O)L(U)t(I)on

 

 

~Qadar Dwon' 9

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Corey says:

BOOM, I felt it! Incredible write!
 

Tali says:

I read this last night, forgot to comment and I HAD to come back today and let you know how amazing this poem is. Definitely one of my favorites The words are intoxicating.
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Tali_so sweet... I'm definitely humbled by your comment and feedback! I definitely felt good penning and expressing this piece.. Some poetic revelations came to me and I just had to spill.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Always enjoy someone good at their craft be it mechanic brick mason they have a certain pride about them you are good at your craft
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Kingqadardwon' says:

@Mrmelody7... Expressing many many thanks to you my Dopetastic brother. This piece came out of nowhere and I decided to share it with the vibe first, haven't put it on another platform yet.. I like how it it came together well tuned.. You are a Master poet of your craft as well!

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