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hitalot879
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a bit of prairie to seed that other earth I hold inside my mind

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Look Deep

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life

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look deep
stand still & repeat
we got dancing feet
I time to meet & greet
the underscore read
bargain basement heads
face filled with lead

the verge of lying dead
sometimes on sometimes not
we beg and borrow a lot
time is on our side
yet time waits for no man
do you all understand
falling apart in my hand
you can be a better man
living in a far away land

hopefully someday all will understand

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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Look deep indeed - Nice!

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