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Coalhouse
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Mass transit

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Bus Fare warriors

Can't be late

Time zombies devour time

Mass transit

hauling people in diesel to destinations

Uptown

Downtown

Across town

Strap hangers sway in artificial motion

Bodies respond to bumps, flesh jiggles..

Maximum capacity at rush hour

Bus riding etiquette

No reckless eyeballin

No close talkin

Mind your business on the bus

Your public transportation authority...

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2b2b2 says:

Tight Piece brah!! ONE
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mlowe5 says:

Wow! Thanks for the ride, Bro. Love the imagery. Saw much, smelled much, and felt the bumps and coldness of the other passingers struggling with daily life. Getting off here to now go and take that lonely walk and compare the two lonely journeys in this crowded world. Thanks for sharing the reflection. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

LP45 says:

Great piece. Reminds me of mine entitled Subway Stop. Thanks for sharing Coalhouse. Peace and blessings.

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