BrownchildT
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first love
Our Truth
Had me- defy my mama. Look dumb to my friends.
Cause he loves me. They will never understand.
This Love play my Will against me. My perception blind to his hold..
His touch bonds our soul. Fear of "What If” toy with emotion- I dare never show!
Our heat melt all ice of doubt. In his arms we become our Truth.
Like the earth that circle the sun. My world revolves around you.
They will never understand. Love promised me No guarantees.
This is where I Want to be.
™BrownChild
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COMMENTS
love_supreme says: Excellent write. |
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mrmelody7 says: Nice spinning beat images of a twirling ballerina as U read |
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Brownchildt says: This is a very old piece. Thank you latin_lover |
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Brownchildt says: Thank you. mrmelody7 for taking time to read my piece.. |
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gmcgee325 says: Very heartfelt....this is an excellent description of how something so wrong can feel so right.â¤ðŸ’¯ |
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Brownchildt says: gmcgee325 yes, lol exactly for the two people in that moment, everything IS right thank you for taking the time to read my piece. |
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mlowe5 says: Profound write, BrownchildT. The last line takes one back to the title. You are where you want to be; and you will be there until you decide you need to be somewhere else. There is such a great allegorical message in word play and imagery in this write. Thanks for sharing. Peace and Love, mlowe5 |
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Brownchildt says: Thank you mlowe5 for taking the time to read my piece. your insight is on point. |
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RonnieL says: Feelin this piece. Flow of words....DOPE! |
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Brownchildt says: RonnieL thank you |
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