“The mind is friendly stranger”

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just different 1 min read 672 views Mar 22, 2019

The ways of the mind

THE WAYS OF THE MIND Mind is a menace, it drives you through the clouds of thoughts Exposes you through lustful sought All triggered by curious wonders. Mind is a menace, it never let's you be to rest, but always makes you feel duress, all triggered by your resent issues. Mind is a menace, it drives you through the clouds of thoughts. There is no break to this constant ponder. In every thought there is a good and a bad, but what you see is what you get. Mind is a menace but we play a role to its dubious ways. By iscomart

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RonnieL

Thought provoking piece. The mind is an amazing thing.

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LP45

Nice write Iscomart.Definitely makes one wonder. Thanks for sharing.

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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mlowe5

Great write, Iscomart. Provoking. Makes you think who's controlling whom? The mind you or you the mind. Enjoyed the read. Peace and Love, mlowe5

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Iscomart

Ronniel am sorry you found it provoking, but its just how I felt at that point.

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Iscomart

molowe5,Latin-lover,ladypoet45, and Ronniel thank you for the likes and comments

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mlowe5

Thanks Iscomart. Remember, the poet can only write from his/her perspective. A provocative piece of poetry is a poem that causes one to think on a deeper level. To say that a poem is provoking is a poetic compliment. Continue to be as provacative as the creative need presents itself. Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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mlowe5

Once again, thanks Iscomart. Welcome to the Village, we at Poetry Vibe look forward to reading your work. Peace and Love, mlowe5 and the Extended Family .

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Iscomart

Thanks mlowe5, I love this village. Lols

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