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Evaporated Liberation...

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life

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Schooling through

varied waters

of life, snaking

pass seasoned predators,

bated curiosity often reels us

into imprisoning buckets

where we flip-flop each other

into a comatose fate.

 

A comatose fate,

sending suspended minds

and souls u-tubing

distant cousins leaping

from domestic cell-like tanks

seeking a liberation

evolution failed to ensure.

 

Such is the ironic fate

of many creatures

who often find themselves

being like lost fish out of water;

floundering in illusionary liberation.

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mrmelody7 says:

The title tells the story very well like the colorful language n this

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mlowe5 says:

Many thanks to you all. Much appreciated. Peace and Love.

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