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lightness in the dark

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Chilly Day At The Park...

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The sun came out but hid its heat;

While the wind remained at rest,

The chill kept moving about.

 

The array of trees—leafless

And leafy—stood as still as death;

Little children played mid-winter games.

 

Two old men sat at a park table;

Seriously they played their chess game.

 

On a nearby bench, a young man

Stretched out—covered with a sign:

“I’m homeless.  Please let me sleep.”

 

People merrily walked by;

Pets led or gaily followed behind:

It was just another chilly day at the park.

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The Immortal Wize says:

This reads like a painting by Norman Rockwell, it is fine art.
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mlowe5 says:

Poet Wize, I am honored and humbled by your encouraging feedback. Many Thanks. Peace and Love, mlowe
 

LP45 says:

Excellent visualization Mlowe5. It was like I was right there with you and could see everything. And I agree with Poet Wize's comment also. Thank you for sharing this.
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mlowe5 says:

LP45! Much thanks my Dear Sister. So good to hear from you. I pray all is well with you and Family. Peace, Love and Blessing during the Season. mlowe
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mlowe5 says:

ONE. Thanks. Peace and Love.

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