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Chasingmysoul
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Twisted Fantasy

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romance

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You plucked

 

A beautiful flower

 

Devored its pureness

 

With no intentions of sowing

 

More seeds to grow

 

You wanted to use

 

Till you

 

Couldnt use no more

 

See you spelled

 

Love M-I-N-E

 

I was nothing more than

 

Untouched territory

 

Sort of a tarnish trophy

 

And if I smiled and obliged

 

You would show me

 

Shine me

 

Mold me

 

Into the possibilities

 

I could be

 

But just couldnt get me to be her

 

And here I was thinking

 

I was good enough

 

The one that got away

 

Left for a reason

 

But you couldnt see it

 

So you chased her

 

While I chased you

 

My heart just couldnt let you go

 

It wouldnt say no

 

I searched for yesterdays

 

To duplicate

 

And the more I remembered

 

The more I forgot

 

The way it actually felt

 

I was looking for comfort in old pictures

 

And songs

 

When I physically had you

 

And still felt lost

 

So I convinced myself

 

That it just couldnt have been for nothing

 

Then our love became a waiting game

 

See I wanted you to be the same

 

And too you I had changed

 

Because I wasnt the

 

Same naive woman

 

Thirsty for love you had met

 

You dried me and I canned

 

My true emotions

 

Thinking it would save us

 

But how in the hell can you

 

Lose something you never had?

 

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2b2b2 says:

Powerful Piece!! This is a poetic KNOCKOUT!! Thanks for sharing...WRITE ON! ONE
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mlowe5 says:

A nice rhythmic flow of contemplative awareness. Great word play. Thanks Chasingmysoul, for sharing this beautiful write. Peace and love, mlowe5
 

Elroyken says:

Wow! Good poetry.

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