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axiomatic revelations...

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it is said that the 
things change the more
they stay the same...
without a shadow 
of doubt
this a profound axiom
when considered
in the light 
of its revelations...
indeed
the world has changed
much
yet...so much remains
the same...
once chained bodies
have been emancipated
yet...shackling oppression
remains...
indeed...modes of in-justice
have changed
yet...the in- remains
bonding justice...
the land of the free
and the home of the brave
has certainly changed
yet...as brave as i am here
i'm still not seen as one
being free...
thus...the more things
remain the same
the more we must 
challenge them
to change...
to not do so is bad enough
but to not attempt to do so
is worst...

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LP45 says:

Absolutely true. Standing for nothing means we'll fall for anything. Great write Sir Mlowe5, thanks for sharing.
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mlowe5 says:

Thanks, LadyPoet45. As always, I am indeed honoured by you warm and encouraging feedback. Peace and Love to you and Yours. Mlowe.
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The Immortal Wize says:

POWERFUL!

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PoEt says:

Damn real..I'm feelin it
 

PoEt says:

Damn real..I'm feelin it
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mlowe5 says:

ONE, Poet Wize. Thanks. Peace and Love, Mlowe.
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mlowe5 says:

Many thanbks, PoeEt. Much appreciated. Peace and Love, Mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

Many thanks, PoEt. Much appreciated. My apologies for the spelling errors; typing too fast. Peace and Love, mlowe5
 

Karma says:

Good Poem Poet. I Like the Thought this Piece Conveys.
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mlowe5 says:

Many Thanks, Karma. Peace and Love, mlowe5
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mlowe5 says:

Indeed, love_supreme! Thanks! Peace and Love.

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