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Ancient love

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Ancient times so long ago That when the wind  

Whispered to the water in winter it snowed

 

It was in its infancy had not yet mastered

The magic of turning dew drop into flake snow

 

Forefather and beforemother were just children

And played as children often do

 

Imagining what they'd do when they grew older

As a boy beforefather was content to run like the wind

 

Not caring for such things

As walks thru the woods and tilling the land

 

Looked down on beforemothers love

for quiet walks and talks of the future

 

Standing real close

 

While looking in each other's eyes

and holding hands

 

Looking to the stars meant more to him

Something to master Says he someday

 

I will steal one from the sky, Make fire

and make all before it See fear and run for their lives

 

And put it above the clouds

to make the rain fly

 

Had he known then what we know now

He'd have had a forewarning of the coming disaster

 

Sky father being wise above all things

Knew the one sole answer

 

To make his son see beyond what is...

Made him a bow of lemonwood arrows of cedar

 

With strings fashioned from feathers from the eagle

And the arrowhead obsidian

Tied an arrow to the tail and let it fly

 

Pulled down a star hung it in the sky

then let it go

 

Before mother had a gift of love

For all living things, pulled the fire from the sky

 

warmed a pot Of fresh beans  

giving filled bellies, a heavenly glow 

 

and that natual shine 

 

 hhhmmmm! 

 

           C2      

 

 

 

 

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Outstanding write! Beautifully penned!
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Charles2 says:

Thank you, Kingqadarwon

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mrmelody7 says:

Very nicely put together ditto King Q
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mlowe5 says:

Cook on, my Brother! Cook on. Thanks for sharing such beautiful sharing words. Powerful images! Profound thoughts! Peace and Love, mlowe5
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Charles2 says:

Thank you, kindly, mrmelody7, mlowe5...

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