“The mind is friendly stranger”

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just different 1 min read 471 views Sep 16, 2020

Dreams are weird

It was a cool morning in India, so i took a walk, saw a bird then I took a shot... Had a feeling that I killed a duck.... Ended up been a dorky monk, Oh no I killed a man, had to look around... Saw a monkey I suspect could spill the juice so i shot at once... Now am out of rounds, felt exposed so I ran as fast, heading towards the cave ahead.... not minding the darkness within, I went in deep only to stand head on with a Bear I guess... About to die, I woke up on my bed in sweat, with a big grin I felt I saw the future. By iscomart

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mlowe5

Nice! Great approach to dreams that many consider to be "nightmares", because they make us aware of the challenges that life may present. We often do not know what the future may be bring and usually miss the allegorical messages of our dreams; but it's always wise to be somewhat aware than to be be sorry when we come face-to-face with the "now" of the future. It's better to be aware than to be sorry. Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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Iscomart

Thank you very much sir! I appreciate your comment and truely we must learnt to accept and learn from our dreams.

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mlowe5

Continue to develop you creativity, Iscomart. Your potential is limitedless. God has endowed you with a beautiful gift. Continue to share it. Peace and Love.

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Iscomart

😇🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏🙏 very much appreciated

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I like this poem.

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