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The 10 Commandments

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Number 1: Absolutely no gods before the Lord

A simple but costly mistake, we can’t afford

God said jealousy would bring mad wrath!

All the stories of plagues and attacks, y’all do the math!

Number 2: Don’t take God’s name in vain and such…

Y’all be using OMG’s and JC’s a bit too much!

Number 3: Remember to keep the Lord’s Day Holy

You can still enjoy the game, chips and Guacamole

Sunday’s focus should be on God, family, and service

If you don’t work at Chick-Fil-a, please don’t be nervous!

Number 4: I know y'all heard this before

Always honor both your Mom and Dad

If you don’t, when they’re gone, you’d wish you had!

Number 5… Please Don’t Kill!

If you’re ever been provoked, I quote, ‘Please Chill!’

Number 6: Don’t cheat on people, places, or things

Especially when you exchanged vows and wedding rings!

Seven: Thou shall not steal!

If someone ever took your bike, you know how it’ll feel

Number 8: Don’t bear false witness

Because ‘Snitches,’ don’t really get stitches!

Number 9: Shoulda been Number 1 to me!

Don’t be jealous or have envy

The grass is greener, blah, blah, blah

Don’t player hate, congratulate the ‘Bourgeois’

Number 10: Always tell the truth!

It can be difficult for all, old folks and the youth

Follow these rules and a good life will be seen

Your reward’s in Leviticus 25 verse 18!

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mlowe5 says:

nosajm, your poetic genius never ceases to amaze me! Thanks for this beautiful, inspiring, poetic sermon of the allegorical messages in the Commandments--underscoring all with Leviticus 25:18. "Preach" on my Brother! Peace and Love, mlowe5.

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Kingqadardwon' says:

Outstanding! This is Dope man.
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks mlowe5 and Kingqadardwon!

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