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thatygpoetickidd
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lightness in the dark
wonder if i should free write

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I'm watching you

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Oh sky how sinister you must be looking down at me watching my every move seeing me take each breath how easy it must be for you to feel so superior to not only be able to watch me from one point while you get me from all angles and aspects of life I only get the broader aspects of you only being able to see what's layed out in front of me and not the layers behind it other than god you're the only one who knows everything about from all my faults, mistakes to my dreams and goals you know them all yet the same can be said about you decade's of knowledge, truth's. They all lie right above our heads oh sky how easy it must be for you..you must feel so superior looking down at me from all angles you mocc me with your intelligence, infinite wisdom, your secrets ah yes your secrets you're hiding more than anyone on this planet you constantly display your power on a daily basis our day depends on your mood you watch over the weather like they're your personal children you chose not to have control over them your and we suffer the side effects from it, when it's raining, Windy, haling snow, 100 degree weather, typhoons, tsunamis, earthquake yes how sinister you must be Tomorrow isn't promise at least not to us you're not a living entity so you don't have those problems maybe tomorrow is promise to you....you stir a silent rage in me so deep that all I can do is breathe the cold concrete pressed against my feet rooted to the earth absorbing the life force I declare that I will seek out the truths that you hide to me you're not just a "sky" you're something much More you're .... sinister

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The Immortal Wize says:

Yeah, this is dope, I can relate to these words.

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