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Saturation

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Saturation:  the state or process that occurs when no more of something can be absorbed, combined with, or added.

To much Blue
To much Green
The colors underneath can’t shine through
Yellow  brush stokes disappear
This canvas is permanently  stained with
my choices of what I knew then
Now I’ve tried to remove the excess
years later to no avail.
I know now less is more
Sometimes the choices we make in life
become permanent fabric of our lives
and we wish we could go back  to get a
DO OVER.

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mlowe5 says:

Wow! Saturated indeed. That's why sometimes we need to just wring out certain "fabric" of life "starch" iron out the wrinkles. Some things you don't send to the "cleaners". You have to get a new ironing board cover and do ironing yourself. Thanks for the share. Peace and Love, M'Lowe.

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