WarriorCarryingWater
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life
Dog $#!+ wrapped in plastic bags
Dropped from an overpass
Hit my windshield, splash!
A gross vision impairment caused me to crash
When I hit the guard rail, airbags blasted thru the dash
Above the freeway, I saw some kids laughing and running fast
My car was ruined and smelled bad
But I’m alive thanks to God, seatbelts, and an airbag
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COMMENTS
LP45 says: Wow. Great write and imagery nosajm. Thanks for sharing. |
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Starr says: Great short storytelling! Enjoyed this piece very much. I hope this was your imagination and not a personal experience. Silly kids! smh Great write. |
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mlowe5 says: Great write! Wiped, gave thanks. Threw the paper out. Gave God the shout! Thanks for the share. Poor kids, not looking out! Peace and Love...From Above. |
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WarriorCarryingWater says: Thanks LP45, Starr, and mlowe5! No, it was completely fiction! |
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