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lightness in the dark

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Against The Grain

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rainstorms back to back, his blood is of black

he used to extend his folding arms

but kept sinking into a world of harm

he got to thinking

alone in the p.m. hours

alcohol showers

his heart more sour than ever

severed from the mental hurt

scarred from the grit of the dirt

migraines and stains on my shirt

so tired

come reap the flame from this fire

its time he defend

contend to a world pretend

my help was all in vain

purple rain view

glaring out window panes

my circle is now few

gave hundreds a helping hand

but they soared off

finger amputation in return

always seeming at a loss

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DeleDivine says:

WOW!! This is Magnificent!! Brotherman is drinking his sorrows away just to get through the day!! Sends his love out in this cold world and gets the cold shoulder in return!! This a Magnificent piece!! Your style is so real!!:-) You motivate me too!!
 

lloydboy35 says:

I appreciate it a great deal!!! Are you featured on any other poetry websites?

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DeleDivine says:

You're welcome. For sure and I have a website:-)
 

love_supreme says:

Wow, that was deep.

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