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Charles2

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Anticipation

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Acute... awareness

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life

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the paralysis 

 

strikes deep

 

pain centers register 

off the Richter scale

 

its impossible to sleep

 

mind numbing anguish 

washes over bloodshot eyes

 

as the sledge hammering 

from HELL

 

returns with violent spasms

 

which rock the core

of awareness 

 

ratcheting ever higher 

 

welcoming 

whatever price addiction brings 

 

as if temporary wings will give 

some solace to lift our tortured souls 

 

to a momentary oasis of restful peace

 

as opposed to the raging nightmare 

 

hovering over the gaping chasm of terror 

 

frozen with 

exponentially ramping fright

 

as a cat chasing a fleeing bird, 

captured midflight

 

 

C2   

 

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Contest Winner  

mlowe5 says:

An acute awareness indeed. Like there is no way that "weightlessness in outer space can, in no way, be compared to the oppressive weight upon on us down here in space of life we're living in! Nice share. Thanks. Peace and Love.
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Charles2 says:

Gravitational forces have no limitation through space... tidal waves and electricity move in unexpected ways/beyond our imagination

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