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WarriorCarryingWater
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The human race is a chase, the prey is our dreams.

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Over the course of my days

My brothers, cousins, family and friends, in various ways

Provided me with context

Guiding me as often as my parents, church, school, the streets, right and left

On walks to the store, and back home from practice

Provided me with hundreds of landmarks, like an atlas 

Hours in the back seat, spent on road trips

Splitting up Penny Candy, but never the cherry fun dip!

Footnotes in my biography, they helped me to make sense

I’d listen to their wisdom, as I dragged sticks along a fence

The feedback and sounds would resonate

Years of encouragement and direction, drove me to be great

Learning from their achievements and mistakes 

I worked to return the favor, in time

To contribute my own footnotes and advice down the line

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King Suspire says:

Passing on knowledge gained, with your own is what it's all about
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WarriorCarryingWater says:

Thanks King Suspire!

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mlowe5 says:

The onderful oneness of movement! Peace and Love.
 

mrmelody7 says:

Nice one Can easily visualize what you are saying know exactly where you comin from

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