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Odyssey

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so
I wonder what would it be like
if I were a planet in your universe

what if I flew too near to your sun?

would you singe my wings like Icarus
hurling me downward onto the jagged rocks of your shores?

could I revolve
and evolve within your solar system
keeping track of time and seasons?

would you support me with your gravity
or would I fall from your galaxy into unknown worlds beyond?

would I be just another planet in your universe?
another star among the millions
illuminating your nocturnal skies?

I wonder what it would be like
if I were a planet
in your universe

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mlowe5 says:

Wow, deep! Being here wondering, we already know the answer. We journey onward as survivors---universal. I wonder how long will it take for humanity to be one for you and me. Great pondering write for who/whom-ever is in need of awareness in the same universe of humanity. Pen own, Newpanther! Thanks for this powerful pondering awakening share. Peace and Love.
 

Belindathapoet says:

NICE!!!

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