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Charrie_B105
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layaway

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There’s millions of items to chose
You knew what you was looking for
It’s been on you mind while you been shopping around
You been looking around everywhere for this item
You found it
All you can think about is the amount of time you put in looking for it
All the places you went shopping for it
You put it in your mind all the plans you have for this item
How you will make use of it and take care of it
Money wasn’t the issue because you been looking for a while
You willing to spend everything in your wallet for it
You walking with this item and so happy that you finally found it
Then you decided to check the price out
The price for your item was costly
Now you having second thoughts
You can go broke for this item
This rare item you really were dying for
You know this item is everything you ever wanted
But the cost of this item was an issue NOW
You was willing to spend whatever the cost was for it
NOW your thinking is it really worth everything you have
It is really worth it
You battle with your mind
You battle with your mind
You battle with your mind
Damn you still battling with your mind
Putting this item back wasn’t an alternative
Because you if you do
Someone else was going to purchase it with no problem
This is a hot item and somebody out there wants it just as bad as you
But would they make use of it and take care of it like you knew you would
Was the thought in your head
You battle with your mind
I’m not going to lose this item is all you keep telling yourself
You’re still walking
You’re still battling in your mind
Then you read the sign
Layaway
Layaway
Layaway
Now your mind is at ease
You think to yourself
I can make payments
Until I can finally pay it full
You think when I finish making the payments
I can take it home and make use of it
Cause it is what you been looking for
Now you don’t have to worry about nobody taking it from you
Because his item was my love that’s what he put in the layaway……..
 

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TheYoungMC says:

I really like this like omg. I love the metaphor and all. You are definately an excellent writer!
 

Charrie_B105 says:

Thanks so much same to you

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