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Baleen

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The clouds of krill performed collectively

In hot pursuit of a helpless prey

with no protection

like wolves falling upon sheep

with relentless appetites

the horde comes 

 

Chasing minute phytoplankton

as they sought to be bathed

in nutrients upwelling from the deep

While drinking-up vibrant suns rays

before descending back

down to the depths

to sleep 

 

Back to the krill,

continuing to close-in

for the kill

doing the dance of

Individual pursuit

in a slow-motion ballet

of death dealing

whose swarm in profusion

Fill the sea in every direction

Vast quantities are present stacked

in multiple dimensions

 

Bring on the home team.

Fish, penguins and whales

come to feed

Massive jaws open wide

drawing in huge quantities of krill.

With filter-like natural projections

Instead of teeth.

Extracting a feast,

Consisting of so many individuals

 

A meaty meal

A voracious appetite

a slurry of tiny morsels 

Ejecting the water

Gulping them down blissfully

Ah! Soo nutritious

 

Repositioning, once more

For another happy meal

to replentish the fat store

for the lean times

to come

C2

 

 

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mlowe5 says:

A whaling allegorical message well netted! ONE. Peace and Love
 

love_supreme says:

Very nice

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