Sometimes my mind goes astray
I don't know whether to go or stay.
Hurt suffocated my heart's breathing. It doesn't beat the same anymore. Suffocated by lies.
I can't think anymore.
A deep dull feeling in my soul.
My chest hurts from trying to bring my breathing back to normal. Gasping for air.
A gut wrenching feeling.
Like LOVE diving off the high mountain tops of my heart.
Falling and falling and falling and falling....
A never ending fall.
No where to land.
Nobody to catch me.
Loss
Of
Valuable
Energy.
What's LOVE?
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The Immortal Wize says: Good question when you find the answer, let me know. |
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mrmelody7 says: Yesterday after hearing about the passing of Tina Turner I was playing her song whats love got to do with it then I see this very emotional visual write of Poetic Passion very well presented |
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Ms.PoeticPassion says: @The Immortal Wise. Thanks for the read. It is a word with so many meanings. It's all in the heart and eyes of the one who wants to love or be loved. Such a mystery.... |
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Ms.PoeticPassion says: *The Immortal Wize....had to correct the name spelling....lol |
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Ms.PoeticPassion says: @Mrmelody7. Thank you so much for reading. It's always a pleasure to read your feedback. Yes, Tina Turner said it perfectly "What's love got to do with it?" "Who needs a heart, when a heart can be broken?" See....now you got me in here singing out loud early this morning.....lol (Rest In Peace Tina Turner) Thanks so much for the read |
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Belindathapoet says: Excellent Write!!! |
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Ms.PoeticPassion says: @belindathapoet. Thanks so much |
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Newpanther says: Captivating flow!!! |
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Ms.PoeticPassion says: @NewPanther.... Thanks |
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