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Ink roached infestation didst derive within mice elf


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Ink roached infestation didst derive within mice elf

Minor emendations to following
just posted verse
oversight to correct dissatisfaction,
yours truly I do curse
ah... methinks if hands of time
can be made to go in reverse
a more exemplary version
to appease acclaimed unnamed wordsmith
cause he feels alarmed

crafting poem worse
than ChatGPT artificial intelligence
app can write
will find him superfluous.

Thus writer of these words
forever mus lee experiencing

craving to eat cheese,

a milk product
eternally preserved within
annals, chronicles, epistles,
et cetera of human civilization
and it's discontents
analogous viz ode (old)

as time itself and lustressly
buttressed on a Grecian Ode frieze
linkedin to Sosibios Vase inductees.


Carp diem bespeaks moment to seize,

whether above memorialized chaste lovers
or emblematic, iconic and opportunistic
actresses Thelma and Louise
the 90's film of female rage
an adventure road drama

caper they did stage,
but aforementioned seminal wage
courtesy Rameses II
begat robust lineage
synonymous with sturdy anchorage,
whereby said prolific breeder
endowed legions of sons and daughter
to carry on heritage.

Nothing but gridlock traffic
(far as thee eye could see)
heading east on Schuylkill Expressway
(oxymoronic name for quickest route
into Greek translation

center city of brotherly love,
albeit Philadelphia),

yet this papa promised eldest daughter

then freshly minted University
of Pennsylvania graduate


hoping to make amends
prior to first born heading
of into blue, ...er rather green,
asper legal tender beyond
without doubt experiencing more
financial security than yours truly,

whose penurious crisis
tantamount to being self ostracized
within luxe MainLine,

where one percent flaunt their wealth


disparage dirt poor

festive folks like this sir
meaning husband, his spouse
plus attendant two biological kin
reinforcing feeling inferior,

among those earning or
inheriting fistfulls of moolah,

said offspring also lodged opprobrium
citing slovenly housekeeping
amidst generations (Zison heirlooms)

housed within residence
at 1148 Greentree Lane
yielding barely ample space

our family of four analogous

to sardines in a tin packed to the gills,

which pennilessness exacerbated
since neither mama

nor papa (me) worked
reasons squarely triangulated

linkedin to mental illness


asper myself –

unsung hero of tom tom club

chronic anxiety, panic attacks
with concomitant courtesy benefits;

adrenaline maddeningly coursing thru veins

palms sweating profusely, racing heart

irritable bowels syndrome, nausea, vertigo...

physiological symptoms
played offal, nasty, malicious

cruel version of

knick knack paddy whack...

with these lovely bones

severely disabled me to function
academia, employment, socialization...
imperiled satisfactory existence
learning, working, commingling

felt like butchered bovine
at slaughterhouse five.


Bonhomie within new riders
on the purple sage foo fighting

beastie boy here
in short air supply,

an evanescent understatement,

now impossible mission to recoup

sabotaged, jackbooted, atrophied....

blissful happy go lucky little boy

blessedly energetic innately


nervousness found

yours truly tensing up,
manifesting cringing pose
no matter parents lenient,

though father soulfully

bellowed stern rebukes

perhaps interpreting paternal rejection

sole son less gifted prowess with smarts

in short, no weigh,

shape, or form, a polymath

cultivated, habituated, ossified
once playful quirky little rascal

set tilled under veritable weathered
sedimentary stagnancy for peat sakes
psyche got bogged down
into impermeable metamorphic
igneous hardrock.


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