Thorough29 | Poetry Vibe
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My life is moving at slow speed

While the world moves so fast

My emotions are tearing my heart apart

While my relationship decrease

My brain is working overtime

While my mind doesn't think

Im sinking into misery until I think of palm

In which my body laid in, I was a slave then

Not open to the reality world

But I cried then, as I cry now

Cause life's not perfect and neither am I

But why? Do we have to try?

To survive, to stay alive, and be worthy in people's eyes

When we all lie and die,

And they say a smile relieves stress...

I'll do my best* 


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love_supreme says:

I felt this one. Excellent write.

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TEEDUB815 says:

Nice Write.
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mlowe5 says:

Nice, Thorough. The profound flow left me with 2 smiles. ONE. Peace and Love.

Newpanther says:

beautiful pen...

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