Thorough29 | Poetry Vibe
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My Father


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Not present... but present...A blessing*

Guiding me to his alter, as I dig my feet in the sand

There is no other man... that can tame me.

Faithfully in love with his lessons, his blessings,

And the love that he shows,

I wonder if he knows...

I look up to him, literally at night

Praising him in fight...

I'm so grateful


My Heavenly Father *


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love_supreme says:

Excellent write.

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Newpanther says:

seven years... still missing mine...
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mlowe5 says:

Likewise! I was less than 2 years old when my father died some 80 years ago. beautiful pen. Thanks for the share. ONE. Peace and Love.

Bragee says:

Great writing! Definitely hits home as father raising daughters. Thanks for sharing! ????

Thorough29 says:

Thank you thoroughbreds but of course im talking about my "Heavenly Father" - God!

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Bragee says:

I gathered that’s it is regarding the Heavenly Father but the way it could be taken both ways is the real art in poetry! Some will read and think of their biological fathers, some will read and think about being a father, and some will read and get the heavenly perspective. Great piece either way!

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