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life 1 min read 434 views Mar 21, 2024

The Importance

every morning she ask
him a question the same
question every morning

"you want breakfast"

every morning he gives
her an answer the same 
answer every morning 

"yes"

every morning she  
replies to his answer 
with another question

"do you want anything 
in particular or do you
want me to surprise you"

every morning he says
to her "surprise me"

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love_supreme

Excellent write.

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mlowe5

Get ready for that morning when she says, "Surprise Honey; no breakfast!" Cute write. Enjoyed it. One. Peace and Love.

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