you're my favorite poem
to read and talk about I talk about every line I talk about
your form your style your
rhyme I talk about you all
the time mentally I plagiarize imagining you
were mine knowing that if
I were the poet who wrote your lines you probably
wouldn't be recognized or that well known of a poem
I critically critique my own pursuit of perfection meeting the goal is a misconception on closer inspection you prove to be an exception I'm emotionally smitten with the angles and curves of your inspiring dark theme
that mesmerize me to memorize each line I
wrote this to devote this to the poet who wrote you
The Immortal Wize
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The Spirit Of Flow
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mlowe5 says: A beautiful inspiring tribute. ONE. PEACE AND LOVE. |
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