You, On My Mind...
white snow falling on black streets
you, on my mind...
the arrival of spring
awakens the earth with every shade of green
you, on my mind...
summer
melting the senses
hypnotizing the body into submission
you on my mind...
autumn
caressing
inviting
enticing the soul into a myriad of unspeakable pleasures
you on my mind...
I lay in bed and wonder in the darkness
...am I on your mind?
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Excellent write.
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I love the concept of this piece. for some reason I really really love the way it starts, like reading it make you see the soft white snowflakes melting into the pavement and disappearing into the thought of her...on your mind. and then that you on my mind continues throughout the piece in all the right places. I love this one!
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