you were my best love and my dearest friend I've written a thousand pieces about what we had I want the world to know I was in love with someone who truly loved me I didn't know I'll never know that kind of unconditional vibe like you and I can't deny I didn't try to recreate the time the impossible climb too many parts to the story to pause to read have to go on with life can't stop to grieve repress the feeling avoid the need the closest I ever felt to you is when I fall asleep when I'm awake the distance is too much for me I'm lonely not because I'm alone it's because you're gone all the lonely years dried up all the falling tears holding a picture in my mind of you when you were here letting go is for me to decide not while unprocessed griefs is still inside if I had a chance to tell you bye if I had a reason why you had to die every now and then I put pen to paper to add to the pile of stuff I wrote just because
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Leepaul says: Very generous. |
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love_supreme says: Excellent write. |
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ThePoetess says: " I've written a thousand pieces about what we had" it's amazing to be able to take your thoughts and feelings about a person and spill them onto the page for the world to see, i hope they reach your muse. |
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