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Hebrew King

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first love

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Intellectual intimacy,

face to face with eyes drawn.

 

Her heart pulsed heavily,

heaving as we carried on.

 

She stowed old emotions,

still holding her baggage claimed.

I threw it out the window,

the pane kicking it on its way.

 

She smiled and pointed beyond

the frame,  acknowledging the day.

 

I made a choice to love her different

because she was always too afraid.

 

—JG

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ThePoetess says:

When the connection is there mentally, the physical is so much better..."I made a choice to love her different" I can't wait to read more about that in the future. Beautiful piece!

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Hebrew King says:

And I can’t wait to share all that I have to say. Thank you Poetess, as always!

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