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life 1 min read 157 views Jul 29, 2026

Weather or Not

My mind is flacking,

thoughts heavy on my shoulder.

 

The weight is bearing,

and my posture is leaning over.

 

I'm bent on the meaning of this,

teetering trying to stay straight.

 

I haven't been right since you left, 

and you weren't wrong not to stay.

 

You deserved better, not my cloud

hanging over your pleasant weather.

 

Not my angst that came with it, 

taking the flight from your feather.

 

—JG

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ThePoetess

"I haven't been right since you left, and you weren't wrong not to stay." hard pill to swallow but when you're able to admit that, that's where you show how much you really love and care for her, freeing her because you know it would be better for her heart even though it hurts yours as a result, Great ink!

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