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Dog Love

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A person gets lonly we all know why, its no fog.

So naturly the person gets a dog.

The person now has a responsiblity to love the dog care for the dog the person has to make shore the person feeds the dog.

The person promises the dog the person will do these things for she also needs the dog.

True enough the person dose so.

Mayde the person feels she must so.

 

Never the less the dog loves the person unconditionly and shakes its tail at the person every morning and afternoon.

 

Time passes and the person starts to forget play time with the dog.

Time passes and it worsins tempers are as short as the walk time with the dog.

Time passes and now the person beats the dog.

Time passes watch how the person kicks the dog.

Time passes God watches how the person treats the dog.

Ribbs, limbs and hips broken.

The dog limps face beaten, broosed and swollen.

The promise forgoten the persons love loses loyalty.

Even in fear the dog will still bouw to royalty.

 

Never the less the dog loves the person unconditionly and shakes its tale at the person every morning and afternoon.

 

No love, no care and no food but the dog will stay and never forget.

The dog will still with loyalty aim to serve and protect.

The dog had made a promise in its heart to do so till deth.

The dog knows what the person is hiding inside in still depth.

 

Never the less I will love you unconditionaly and shake my tail at you every morning and afternoon.

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The Immortal Wize says:

This can be interpreted in so many ways, the dog stands out but remove the tail and wow! very clever, emotional flow of words.

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CT.poet says:

I gues most of the time i get my good work from pain. pros and cons i gues.

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