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You and I

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romance

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 As you walked into this old forgotten hall, And just when looking i began to fall.

I wish i could frame you and this feeling on the wall, To stare at till there is no time, No time at all.

From a distance i watched as the flowers brush your cheek, As you read the words i wrote i couldnt even speak.

But now i lay here broken heart and blistered feet as you're spinning round my mind, Even right now as i speak.

I can tell every breath that you're breathing, I can feel it the thoughts that your thinking.

We can talk til a thousand years have gone by my  love just you and I.

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The Immortal Wize says:

Another masterpiece greatly enjoyed, much more than writing I love to read and I must say I love your voice in your poetry.
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tretre says:

Thank you. When you have passion in your heart, It comes easy when written on paper. Thanks again

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